Such a good story! It's rare that I read dialogue and don't think, are we on Wisteria Lane or trying to be Raymond Chandler? Such a good ending too. Go straight to the top of the class xx
It shows that you’re a sensitive human being. If we could all imagine, really imagine, how it must feel to be someone else, we wouldn’t behave so crassly when we’re faced with human hardship.
Brilliant story. Life a movie script.
Thanks very much Lee. Happy to talk movie script offers!
Such a good story! It's rare that I read dialogue and don't think, are we on Wisteria Lane or trying to be Raymond Chandler? Such a good ending too. Go straight to the top of the class xx
Oh thank you Jane. That is lovely of you to say so. I found it strangely (sadly?) easy to imagine these scenes.
It shows that you’re a sensitive human being. If we could all imagine, really imagine, how it must feel to be someone else, we wouldn’t behave so crassly when we’re faced with human hardship.
G’day.
Got a call from the little gran to report that his younger sister had excreted a fruit sticker.
So much for a comedy of manners. But l have myself to blame for reporting to the littl’n that my baby brother had swallowed our mother’s wedding ring.
Low and behold, l had told him a similar story.
So much for foibles and family history!
Good work, Dave.